范例二：

　　Day 2

　　Last Sunday was Tree Planting Day.Some students decided to plant some treesin the mountains. In the morning they met at the school gate.Then they wentthere by bus. When they got there, they began to plant trees. Some dug holes,some planted trees, and others  wateredthe trees. They worked very hard until they came back home in the very lateafternoon.

　　They were very tired but they felt veryhappy.

　　1 Tree Planting Day.【有的孩子这个节不会说】

　　2 decided to

　　3 the school gate.【作文中常见见面地址，school gate】

　　4 When 学会使用时间状语从句，作文中多用用很好。

　　5 Some dug holes,some planted trees, and others  wateredthe trees. some...some...others... 一些，一些，还有一些，看图作文中可多用。

　　6 They worked very hard until they came back home in the very lateafternoon. Until，这个词孩子都认识，就是不用它。用的好了很出彩。