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小升初英语写作要领:词语简化技巧

互联网 2010-08-19 09:35:20

想到一点儿写作细节上的小技巧,和大家分享一下:

  策略之一:用介词短语替代从句。

  例:  

  原句: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  修改后: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  原句: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

  修改后: At the second traffic light turn left.



  策略之二:删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语。

  例:

  原句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

  修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

  注:把句中的”three parts”改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词”which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如”that”去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。


 

  策略之三:剔除你不需要的单词。

  "Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "

  写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词”joint”和”telephone”,注意删去不必要的词。

 

 

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